high, high birdie (candycane_rix) wrote in waldensucks,
high, high birdie
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Simplicity~

Ahh, hello, (: 'Suppose an introduction is due.

I find myself as a romantic at heart, with naturalistic ideals on the side.
So, going into Walden, I remembered something an old history teacher said to me...

Its really boring. Who cares about a spider walking across the grass. But when you grow (aka, college days) you start to appreciate Walden.

It which I say, fat chance. Walden was everything I expected of it. Boring, drawn on, and totally not worth all the jibber-jabber everyone gives it.

Yes, I also have a little

You always drawled on about simplicity, simplicity, simplicity,
Yet in your writing… simplicity I did not see.
You had ants at war, with frilly metaphors.
Pages and pages of a pig on hiatus,
And I couldn’t help but think to myself:
“I really hate this.”

Oh Advil could not cure
The aftermath of listening to you
Complain about taxes for the war.
A night in jail, until someone else paid your bail.
Where you scarred? Did you get a hideous bruise?
No, you imagined a Rhine Cruise.

A Zen temple, has monks in life dedication,
And yet their praise is nothing
Compared to your 2 year, 2 month, 2 day vacation.



for you.
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Sarah!
Awesome poem, man
Henry oh Henry
Thank you, thank you, [bows]


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x3 Self reliance biznitch!
*applauds* that was a B-E-A-yooteefull poem! i enjoyed it.
Thank you, hehe :3~

Just curious.... Are you in a band, or in marching band? :0~
im in all band. concert, marching, string ensemble, pit, pep, jazz...yes, i am a nerd. are you in band?
Uhm. No. I was, then I realized I was meant to enjoy music played by others instead of trying to play it myself.

I'm more of an art person :0~
loved it - none of us will ever like walden....
WOOOOO!! great poem

love it :)